" THE FREAKS COME OUT AT NIGHT "
After the after-party, she walked the softly lit street
Making her way past prostitutes in doorways
The light rain making the hot streets
Steam, with a rising odor of semen and wet hair
Intoxicated, she wobbled, splashing through puddles
As she turned for the shortcut through the dark alleyway
Past dumpsters and bums clutching their bottles
When a hand from behind clutched her hair
And with great force, smashed her face everywhere
Into the wall, the dumpster, the sewer grate
And as she lay bleeding he pissed in her face
And her last thought was that it was a very warm rain
She was found the next day
With all evidence washed away
And an envelope in her pocket
That read,
Have a nice day....
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Comments
What??!! Oh my god, this one was just a different level of crazy, I've written some messed up crazy in my time but this just takes the lid of the jar and let's all sorts of wtfs fly out, first, great rhyme scheme towards the end and the ending itself was well done, you held nothing back and let the filth fly in this one gross but frustratingly good/bad write
LOL!!.........thanx for giving it a shot brother!!............smiles..........T xo
Tony...
Please tell me she didn't see the whole thing...
BEFORE HER DEMISE...
Ooh...
OUCH!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hey Feathers!!.........it's just a story from the true story of Dr. Thomas Cream.........a serial killer before we were documenting serial killers.........so from my mind to yours........she never saw a thing.......and never felt a thing either.........you're so cool...........you're one of my favorites .....because of your charm ........and unique style...........stay cool sweetheart...........smiles..........T xo
Creepy haha, but awesome love you bro, have a nice day ;) xox
Thanx Deano!!.........you're right Big Sis!!.........just havin' some fun!!..............Love and Rockets!!.........T xo
Fun is always good, till the sun rises hehe xox
Erie yet honest write. Keeping in mind, so many like her have disappeared into the night. A great write and good social commentary.
Kimmy Alan!!.........I so look forward to your reviews and comments...........thank you for recognizing the social commentary innate here............your friend and admirer...........T xo
This was not light reading
Can I say you are good horror story teller?
Tony the terrible!! Good writer though :)
I fear this genre!
Jai Masters!!........."Tony The Terrible" huh?...........kinda like it as a non-de-plume...........especially for my dark writes!!.............never gonna come with something as cool as JAI MASTERS though! (lol!)..........much Love to you bro!!............and thanx for this............Love and Rockets!!...........T xo