Poem -
Freedom Is Distinction
As long as the road that follows
As lone as my heart that calls,
Dire straints contain my being,
Pressed against idiotic walls.
Suppression of the untamed heart,
Will lead to a dead end,
As far as an ocean stretches
Emotional strength descends.
By passing of the human oppression
Is feeding on the world's obssesion,
Drained the life I once had,
Life, the strains I once.......
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This laps like waves upon the shore in it's movement and timing..........it is what poetry aspires to be..........this is true progression my brother.........you are becoming SO DAM good D!!......"Dire straints contain my being" (straints is totally original)..........Love This!!............well done!!      ALL STARS  PINNED!!.............Love and Rockets!!................T xo
Thank you T, that is what im striving for. To hear that im going in the right direction is awesome
Appreciate you telling me that. Smiles with much appreciation.
Hi Devon you have certainly proved why you are the a o m . You are getting better with each write. Your comments on everyone s poems are awesome too. Cheers :)hrlÂ
Now Hardrock that is so nice of you to say good sir. I enjoy reading and commenting it is what inspires me and hopefully what inspires everyone else. Do me a favor keep writing and commenting HRL you are becoming a favorite voice on our great site.
Beautiful words Devon, loved it ❤
Thank you Nardine I appreciate you stopping by and loving it.