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Freestyle or Verse ?

Freestyle or Verse ?

Freestyle or verse ? Does it matter if one pours out their heart.. I am trying my utmost not to rhymatically rhyme as I create my work of art.. 

Oh dear I think I’ve gone and done it again.. why do I always write in verse ?..you see even if I don’t want to rhyme.. it comes naturally when I converse.. 

Well I guess I’ll have to stop thinking in verse and try harder the next time.. in one of these poems I shall succeed.. some say I almost talk in rhyme.. so I portray this across for those that read

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Angel

Good write enjoyed Jill angel

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Jill Tait

Awww thanks Angel my love so kind of you ❤️❤️❤️

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Marion

It doesn't matter how anything is written, (no one way is superior to another )...it is the words that count and their power to move the reader, ps...I find it difficult to write in prose..????❤️

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Jill Tait

Awww yes very true lol I was just stuck what u pen so wrote that nonsense haha xxx

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Tony Taylor

YAY!! JILL!!... this is such relevant subject matter... especially for a site like this...... where I think Every writer has come up against this very self-questioning!!...... For me......I write mostly in poetic prose (Freestyle)...... and I think I do that because I'm a songwriter and I've ALWAYS written with some kind of rhyme scheme...... so to me writing Verse comes so easily that I needed the challenge of Prose just to keep me engaged... when Cherie is completely the opposite...... so like Marion said..... neither is superior.... it just matters how well you stylize your choices.... or "Make them Your Own" so to speak!!..... Finding your voice is such a fun and engaging process..... it's one of the reasons I look upon poetry as "The Last Pure Art Form"...... uncorrupted by money or power/influence.......I LOVE IT..... and I Love you for bringing it up....I hope you get a TON of comments and opinions ohm this..... I'm curious to see the impressions of others where this subject matter is concerned.....ALL STARS!!.... Fun Stuff!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo. : )
Ps. I just posted a poem for Cherie Birthday if you'd like to wish her a Happy Birthday....... smiles......T xo. : )

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Jill Tait

Aww Thanks loads Tony I’m almost scared ot facing freestyle lol coz rhyming is easy to me but lol NOT freestyle :) xx

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