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freezing over.

Maybe in another life
We'll have that chance to dance,

There is ice upon the lake now
And we are skating thin,

In order to hold your hand
I am suffering within,

Letting go seems the only way
to survive,

I once died in Order
to become apart of living
more alive,

it's not about the love
or the way my heart it feels,

it's about this deep hollow
the way each layer peels,

when just starting to heel
your ability to make it real
is absent,

though my mind wills it to be true
That ice upon the lake,
no warmth is getting too.

Nardine sanderson 21/06/2015.

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Honorable Poetess Nardine Sandersosn,

Great write, highly melancholic and filled with drops of sorrow, I wish to appreciate and feature this in my columns and also to get it translated with your kind permission.I love the below lines, the most

I once died in Order
to become apart of living
more alive,

it's not about the love
or the way my heart it feels,

it's about this deep hollow
the way each layer peels,

There is a great deal love here and there, in this universe. We have to celebrate the pain, the suffering, the process, the transformation, the healing, the truth, and the light. Our heart opens like a lotus blossom after it has risen from the muddy lake and waters where its seed were planted and nurtured into a wondrous miracle...a testament to the power of love.
 

Thanks for sharing,

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Honorable Poetess Nardine,

Thanks for your kind reply, but you did not say anything about your permission, I always ask individually for each and every action prior to my assignments, I seek your permission again

Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Nardine Sanderson

Sorry Willy of course you can translate it, much love nardine xox

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COSMOFUNNEL Team

Hi Nardine Sanderson,

Congrats, your poem is now being promoted on our F.B page.

Glide on love.

The Cosmofunnel team.

 

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COSMOFUNNEL Team

Hi Nardine Sanderson,

Congrats, your poem is now being promoted on our F.B page.

Glide on love.

The Cosmofunnel team.

 

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you so much Cosmofunnel team :) this poem means alot to me at present I'm extremely happy to have it promoted on your Facebook page
Much love and appreciation nardine Sanderson xox

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Honorable VIP Poetess Nardine Sanderson,

Congrats on your poem being promoted to COSMO FB page.

Regards

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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sparrowsong

Congratulations Nardine...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Jesse Torres

This is so amazing. Love it, thanks for sharing.:)

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Lucas Lazar

The first time I read a composition of Nardine Sanderson I was how the skating rink that she speaks in this poem, frozen, and since then I still work. COSMOFUNNEL I discovered thanks to her, and now here we are both promoted by the page on FB, despite complications in its base life is always simple, just have to let yourself go. A greeting to all.

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Nardine Sanderson

VVLL you are such a beautiful friend , I've been blessed with your friendship since we met and showered with present hugs, adore you my friend, nardine xox

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Steve Green

Such a sad reality but even through the melancholy your poetry generates so much warmth, 

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