Poem -
Frogs In A Tin
Once again
I am beset
With yearnings for home
Elusive places
I may once have dwelled
Content
But such feelings of course
Can never be known
For they hatch and swirl
Involuntary within
Hammering and rattling
Like frogs in a tin
Crashing the boundaries
Helpless, trapped
Sad things confined
In the lonliest mind
M P 25/11/21
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I sense a sudden rattle of feelings, caught off guard from past memories, that dwell hidden out of sight till they hop out on you at awkward moments. Another great write my friend xx
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The vivid imagery this creates in the minds eye is quite astonishing.....like truth willing its way out through the fog of lies and deceit....a most impactful piece of poetic prose!!.......ALL STARS!!....well done MARION!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Thanks so much Tony x
I cannot say ive ever experienced frogs in a tin , however you made it easy to visualize and I swear I could hear them. It really added to the validity of the emotions through a strong visual comparison. I hope they manage to escape like the thoughts of the lonely mind. ~Rob
Hi Rob...lovely to hear from you...thankyou for your insight my friend x