Poem -
From A Fourth Universe Perspective
From a circling infinityΒ
what's never born
never dies,
without character,Β
dimensions
unparalleled by time.
No growth
in flat darkness,
immortality ceases
when life exists...
death
decidesΒ to give breath,
black holes are tinted windows
small insight
into rebalancing the macrocosm,
stars align
in complexities web
spinning spirited bodies
with a cosmos mind of it's own.
A new dark
begins in light
unknowing perpetual space
shares beyond an oversight.
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Comments
stellar read I love your work!
Thank you so very much PoetessDarkly. Β I truly appreciate all of your support lately it means a lot. Peace to you.
Dude!! ~ This is "dead on" man!!...... did you know that physicists have recently discovered that there are black holes at the center of EVERY galaxy!??..... yeah man, I've got some documentaries that break it down even further to black holes existing even at the sub-atomic level....... so your well crafted piece on the possibilities of the fourth dimension are perfect!!...."A new dark begins in light.."..... wow!!...... Love everything about this piece........ sounds like you've been doin' your homework bro!!...... Man, we have SO MUCH to talk about when you get here!! (smiles)....... even the picture is friggin' perfect D!!.......I LOVE living in the 21st century!!......ALL STARS.......smokin' grooves brother poet!!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo
Lol. Thanks TT. I was inspired by something said in a show and I thought how awesome is that....the perspective from a different universe. Research ahhh not really, just a little maybe lol but I had such a mind about this and sat on it awhile until today. Truthfully, I had a feeling you would like this big bro. Peace!
Hey Devon a great write. I enjoyed your deep Thinking yout put into this piece . You are really branching out . Pinned it just for what a superb Β piece it is . Keep churning them out .rock
Hey Rock! Thanks bud. Really good to hear from you man and glad to see you back commenting and I hope writing because I will have to check out some of your new stuff. Peace!
Well written Devon and an excellent perspective on your insight about the fourth dimension. I really enjoyed this poem.
Thanks Joey. Very cool you checked this out, and I appreciate that very much. Peace!