From Tear's to Cheers

A crayon is lost
..and melts in the sun
The colour alone, is faded and runs
The dreams of a child
once as wild as the sun
now a mild spring day
In Ireland .
A candle is lit
somewhere unknown
emotions are tripped
a breath did blow
The fire that burned
inside to out
glowed with pasion in turn
and mindfull bouts
Whilst the wax
hardens with pride
A beautifull sculpture
'threw ashe's did rise
painted with tears
the creation was clear
no more remorse
or repent did bare
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Edvard!
I'm glad I stopped by today, because that was fantastic!! You're very deep, my friend! I'm really impressed. I wish I could write like that! I just wrote about a chicken, or something! Excellent write, my friend!
Matthew.
Oh common dont degrade your self if you dont mean to be metaphrical and bring symbolizim from everyday mundane things ( like i do).
you must be really lucky then cuz i find ur work amazing seriosly ..i admire and understand your style cuz we are so similar.
i get you matt lil?
Edward, this is a visual treat, thanks for sharing, I love this poem, as it is brings to life so many visuals and colours.
Truly moving thanks