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From Tonight, Till forever

Edited by Max

From Tonight, Till forever

Triggered moments
Spark emotions, 
Puddles on the pavement... 
It`s hard to describe.

Hidden 
A secret rendezvous 
The butterflies fly
And excitement travels
From far and wide.

As the sun sets trickling 
It utters in the mind
To seek 
To find 
Reprieve from whence received 

Loves chuckles and chimes 
And slightly blind
But this peace can
and will
Be achieved 

So my love,
Weightless with a weary soul
For we'll relive our love 
To which we hold

As we gaze under starlit skies.
Where our pressing lips connect,
Causing a special, spiritual effect
A-game. With a passionate prize.
 
So,
Hold me close, captive; in a loving embrace,
When I`m pulled pillar to post, hearts beating, simply race,
Let us protect what has been found
 
There is no illusion 
A confident conclusion 
Everlasting is the sound 
One hand in mine 

Into fusion sublime
We interlock our subtle hands.
And finally, connect. 
In all respect,
 
From Tonight.
Till forever.
 
Thank you so much to the poets that made this happen! Hope you enjoyed it.
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Jim "The Lad" ....

great editing Max!...................................................................................Jim

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Being Me

Oh what a beautifully brilliant piece. Who were the poets that collaborated on this?  Everyone did superbly well x

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Being Me

Well now I know why this was so damn good!  Very well done guys 👌👏👏👏👏👏👏 x

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Gwendoline

Thanks it was fun to do. Thank you Max for thinking up such a fab idea. For editing it beautifully and adding a wonderful image. I look forward to more collaborations

Thanks Shaun and Jim who are such talented poets :) 

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The fish of the sea

XD, and now we have a commonplace to do more collabs in the future! It was super fun!

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Gwendoline

Yay we do! 
it was fab funtastic my friend :D 

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Shaun Cronick

Max, thanks for the invite and you are a master editor in what you have woven together and so lovingly presented and achieved.
And thanks to Gwen and Jim who like yourself wrote such beautiful pieces in order for this to work and be shared.

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The fish of the sea

Shaun, a pleasure, and I agree. This wouldn't have worked without everyone's support and effort!

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The fish of the sea

Thanks so much Shaun, Gwen and Jim. You guys were awesome in this Collab!!

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Gwendoline

You brought us all together and made this happen Max. Thank you for being doubly awesome :)

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Tony Taylor

Beautifully Edited MAX!!......Love the formatting if this piece.........couldn't have been easy given that the four of you have such different natural styles......and you were able to interlace them all near imperceptibly.......It's an accomplishment that I wish everyone on the site could read......Thanx so much to you Max, Jim, Gwen, Shaun......can't wait for the next effort!!......"From Tonight. Till Forever."......Smokin' Grooves you guys!! (and gal)......smiles......T xo  :  )

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