Poem -
From you isnt Me
Simply Me
Simply me
​​​​​​We walkÂ
simply me
We talk and we think
Simply me Thoughts race that I've always wonderedÂ
Is this real
are you real
who are we at all
The glass that shines so bright for you
isn't right for me,
 the dark shadow sings a lovely melody to me and goes like thisÂ
Are you realÂ
Is this realÂ
Who are we at allÂ
but what you see isn't me and what I see isn't youÂ
So who are we at all is there meaning in this life or is just a giant circle of being played like fiddle fiddle
can we take time fly away fly away from hereÂ
They say u look like me
And I look like youÂ
But who are we at allÂ
From you is meÂ
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Comments
 cool write! a conversation starter. wrote one called "Who We Are" .................Jim
Very creative Janice, very introspective and creative. Got a melodic tune to it. Also, love the artwork. Awesome!
Have been having the same conversation for months now...Nice to see it expressed so beautifully in words x
Hello Janice
I love the soul searching within this write. You have created a cleverly penned, fluid poem which forces the reader to step within themselves and question the reality of who they are and how they fit in this reality. A really great thought provoking pieceÂ
Gwen xÂ
Hey JANICE!!.......truly thought provoking food for thought.....VERY well penned and I Love the formatting of this piece......ALL STARS!!.....well done dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Wow what a bright poem musing with philosophical questions, can be read with metaphysical connotations as well or for the layman enjoyed simply too. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
The day u commented just so happens to b my birthday