Poem -
From you isnt Me
Simply Me
Simply me
We walk
simply me
We talk and we think
Simply me Thoughts race that I've always wondered
Is this real
are you real
who are we at all
The glass that shines so bright for you
isn't right for me,
the dark shadow sings a lovely melody to me and goes like this
Are you real
Is this real
Who are we at all
but what you see isn't me and what I see isn't you
So who are we at all is there meaning in this life or is just a giant circle of being played like fiddle fiddle
can we take time fly away fly away from here
They say u look like me
And I look like you
But who are we at all
From you is me
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Comments
cool write! a conversation starter. wrote one called "Who We Are" .................Jim
Very creative Janice, very introspective and creative. Got a melodic tune to it. Also, love the artwork. Awesome!
Have been having the same conversation for months now...Nice to see it expressed so beautifully in words x
Hello Janice
I love the soul searching within this write. You have created a cleverly penned, fluid poem which forces the reader to step within themselves and question the reality of who they are and how they fit in this reality. A really great thought provoking piece
Gwen x
Hey JANICE!!.......truly thought provoking food for thought.....VERY well penned and I Love the formatting of this piece......ALL STARS!!.....well done dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Wow what a bright poem musing with philosophical questions, can be read with metaphysical connotations as well or for the layman enjoyed simply too. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
The day u commented just so happens to b my birthday