Poem - 03 November 2014, 19:46 gasping for air. Nardine Sanderson "Breathing in is easier than breathing out When gasping for air Trying to hold what little you can keeping it in there Knowing not all will get through Upon no more breaths Life is done with you". Like 0 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 524 Rating: Total votes: 1 Tags: Breath Death Life Struggle Poetry Genre: Tragedy Freestyle 5 comments
Kimmy Alan03 November 2014, 20:39 Nardine, your work never fails to amaze me. You have a way, of bringing to focus, those valued things we often take for granted. Like breathing. Reply
Nardine Sanderson03 November 2014, 21:49 Thank you beautiful Kimmy, i appreciate your comments you are always so insightful, love you sweetheart, nardine xoxo Reply
Crimson King07 November 2014, 09:47 Truly amazing piece. Meaning stretched into enchanting phrases and words, it's the very definition of poetry. Well done :) Reply
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Nardine, your work never fails to amaze me. You have a way, of bringing to focus, those valued things we often take for granted.
Like breathing.
Thank you beautiful Kimmy, i appreciate your comments you are always so insightful, love you sweetheart, nardine xoxo
Thank you sweetie pie xoxo ❤
Truly amazing piece. Meaning stretched into enchanting phrases and words, it's the very definition of poetry. Well done :)
Thank you so much crimson king xoxo ❤