Poem -
gently the birds
So pretty here
gently the birdsÂ
gently the trees
the wind light and moaning
She tempers her breeze
The water line laps
A blue green delight
It needs not to eat
It had breakfast
Last night
A suicide they say
some lad not too old
Depression they say
removed now, away
and I hope now he'd had
a good supper himself
that the water felt warm
that his soul now is blessed
so so blessed,
M ~
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'Listen to the Birds.' Lovely Verse.
Thankyou x
You will never be at complete peace, yet a part of you will feel less pain each year that passes, as much as we hold on to the love they wouldn't want us to suffer such grief forever, I think it's a mechanism that some of us are born with, probably fate was written at birth. May you find your peace as I see in this tongue in cheek poem, I see such beauty and such ugliness and at the end wishful hopes that at least he is at peace as should you be. Biggest of hugs dearest Marion, your poetry always touches my heartstrings with such immense understanding 🤗💙
Bless you love for your kindness x
May your heart find some calm, Marion. Â BÂ
Thanks B x
Title along with the rhythm for me, M.
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Thanks R x