Poem -
ghost daisies
she writes...
maybe with a vengeance or,
a savage intent
to murder herself
or a world
she just rents
out...
whilst biding her time
blowing bubbles at sky in,
those burned out old fields
where
ghost daisies drink wine
lying down waiting, or
staring at moon
raging the night for
descending
too soon so,
she writes with a vengeance
quite a savage intent
to murder herself when,
she can't find
the rent
M P 24/2/22
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My Goodness MARION!!....what a truly fine piece of work.....I Love how the opening lines and then the closing lines are so closely related.....and the formatting of this beautifully poetic haunting is perfectly crafted.....ALL STARS & PINNED!!......awesome stuff!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xoΒ :Β )
You are too kind Tony...I love kind π₯°....thankyou x
Wow totally agree with Tony.Β
Marion you got this talent for words I've never seen before.Β
Just beautiful my extremely talented friend.Β
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Liliana you are so kind...thankyou love x
HunnyΒ this poem should be on the history walls as is so relevant, so we'll crafted and relates to the struggles of us all.
My grandmother said don't bother planting on me when I'm pushing up daisies.Β
I would like to think that it was her way of saying, I will still provide simple beauty, even from beyond the grave.Β
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I think it probably was her way of saying just that...Liliana...I really appreciate your amazing support and beautiful comments here...thankyou sincerely love β€Β
It started with an amazing title & just got better & betterer .......... N :) x
Aw thankyou Neville x
Wowsers ma'am! all I can say is just.......Wowsers!
Aw thanks so much love x
your genius once again displayed!..............................................................Jim
Ha ha...I'm more of a mind its my madness displayed Jim ππ...thanks so much lovely man x