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Gift wrapped...

Gift wrapped...

Today I got a new bag but yesterday was when I bought it
I pierced my body on the corner of duke Wellington street
I've never seen a tag or zip quite like it but now I'm in it
I'm coming up to you my Lord, don't judge just unwrap the package

My youth was running away from me, my skin was telling me...
I seen too many ghosts in the syringes
I felt my life was coming off the hinges
I witnessed too many judging faces
So please Lord, I'm coming up, don't judge me just unwrap the package

The scars on my body are from the demons you still let walk around
If given the chance I could've been stronger but I'm no longer earth bound
Sorry if I haven't got bows and a name tag, it's just this was a deadly surprise
You can even see the haunting shock within my empty eyes

So while you unwrap me Lord please don't judge, for I was once a blossomed child
So today was a strange day...
I wasn't rich but found myself with a new bag
I'm coming up gift wrapped, I'm fragile but in beautiful style
A naked vessel for you to treasure, but all in black and zip tied!

For you Lord, I'm gift wrapped...

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GREG TUCKER THE...

this is a very stunning write.Β  It is incredible.Β  The imagination WOW!

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Wayne Stubbs

Thanks very much Greg, it only takes a second to see something in something and ya on a roll, well I am anyway, hope that makes sense? ?

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BumbleBea

What a beautiful write. You're words mesmerise me!!! ???? I particularly like the line "You can even see the haunting shock within my empty eyes". Amazing! Bea x

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Wayne Stubbs

Wow thanks very much! With that line, I wanted to bring it back to the image, hopefully I did that! Thanks again Bea for your lovely comment! ?

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BumbleBea

You're welcome my friend! Bea x

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Wayne Stubbs

? haha thanks very much Lisa, I'll work on the other picture it's getting a bit late ?? I was surprised how well that just flowed, thanks again lisa ?

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Wayne Stubbs

Just put it up Haha, you got my mind going lisa ??? it's called drip... Drip...

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