Poem -
The Giver
There was a man
With a love like no mortal
Has ever loved
His love was ceaseless
Though the world wanted
A bite, he smiled
Not out of spite
But out of love
For this man gave
His life but in pieces
To the spider that crawled
And bawled "I'm so hungry
Might I taste of the flesh
And the blood that you yield"
He gave with no care
Take a bite, I have spare
Of this flesh that I wear
No big deal
And he gave to the
Bugs the birds
And mosquitos
The rest of the flesh
That he wore
As a test and a lesson
To leave an impression
To leave one like never before
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Comments
Hello Curious...
This is Great!
It's going into my...
FREAKY Collection!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Yeah I'm not quite sure what place I was in when I wrote this, thanks for adding it though
Curious
Hello Curious...
Seriously...
Do you ever really know?
LOL!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hmm...you make a convincing point I'll contemplate that lol
Very much liked this poem CO
I liked the angle from which you saw the
event and wove your story.
Best wishes Jai :)
Thanks a bunch Jai, it's always nice to see you around, take care my poetic friend
Curious
Yes ONLOOKER!!..........this reads like a beautifully elongated limerick!!..........fantastic storytelling and with such precision...........your rhyme scheme so original...........I read this aloud to Isaac.........he Loved your ending...........me too.........those last three lines..........make for a powerful & definitive ending..........well done bro! (again)...............Love and Rockets!!............T xo
P.S. it felt like a man-snake losing his skin..........smiles.......
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Wow, a man snake haha that's an interesting view of it, thanks for coming around viewing this creepy poem of mine, and thanks again for such a detailed compliment:)
CO