~ GLEANING TRUTH ~
It is I, with my source-less laments
Codifying, with ambiguous intent
Attempting to reach beauty, in uncommon ground
With a muddled mind, wrecked, and earthbound
Why can I not touch, the varied face, of God
Bring its light perspective, without running roughshod
Tear away stage curtains, go straight to play's end
Dance gloriously to sounds of love, as yet, unsent
Yes, it is I, surfing waves, of fortune's fragrance
Without olfactory make up, or even common sense
Can I glean any truth, without time passing
Perhaps a portal from God, that shines, laughing
Like wire, and light-filled automatons
We see beauty, but miss the phenomenon
I've searched my heart, to find my forgotten intents
But, so it is said,
The sun rises, the sun sets, and yet,
Everyone forgets...
Tony Taylor
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Thank you JIM!!...I am so glad to know you have taken the time to read this.....You have been such a great supporter of my work ever since you arrived here six months ago!!......Thank you AGAIN & AGAIN!!.....I don't know how you and Jill do it....but you two are ALWAYS around putting forth the extra effort required to keep this site going......You're awesome brother!!.....Lots of Love!!.......T xo : )
Great poem Tony! I learned playing pool, you only become great if you hang around the great!....................................................................Jim
Jim~ "It is a secret which every intellectual man quickly learns, that, beyond the energy of his possessed and conscious intellect, he is capable of a NEW energy (as of an intellect doubled on itself)......"
~ Ralph Waldo Emerson
Lots of love brother!!......T xo : )
Magical wordplay here. It resembles a dancing flame to me, seems elegant and magical but somehow dangerous. Oh I enjoy your work Tony, and sure did l like this work. Smiles always. FISH
Cool Comment FISH!!......yes, it does dance around a bit.....but doesn't really offer up any danger...unless, of course, you have something to hide from yourself.....which can be dangerous for your mental health. (smiles),,,somehow I don't think that's you though........thanx so much for taking time with this one man......I appreciate it!!.....Peace n Stuff!!.....T xo : )
Tony... Tony... Tony! Wow, you have articulated the desire of every candidate for High Priest, and of every Archana Shaman... something I once thought to be ineffible!!! Pure Magic... and I sculled it down to the dregs my friend.
I don't pin often but this one is certainly a keeper.
SHALOM 🙏🏼
Far Out brother!!......what an awesome comment!!.....REALLY?.....that hadn't occurred to me in any way.....but it's always cool to be surprised by something related to your writing!! Shaman's and Priests!!??....Way groovy!!......thanx so much for the PIN AL!!.....I'm honored....as I respect your thoughts and impressions on my work......high fives!!.....your friend and admirer.......T xo : )