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Glory Unfolded

Glory Unfolded

I breathe these symbols as they float off the page.
They rise without substance from phantoms of age.
Their message penetrates like a dagger of flame!
Searing the mind with a story of pain.

As I ponder this record of spirits dispersed.
I feel their presence, a generation accursed.
Then suddenly a vision, I'm transported through time!
To a mountain repose, and unexpected sublime.

I learn from their wisdom, their folly and grief.
Their gift is a history, through love; they bequeath.
How is it I'm here to witness placid remorse?
Filtered glory unfolded, emitted ere the honed source.

My resolve is increased, I've been beckoned unto light!
Soaring over darkness, inhaling fumes of the night.
I whisper a concept as it melts through my head.
A generation is calling, these people aren't dead!

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Being Me

Very good, Jim 👏👏👏 x

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Marion

This speaks of the wisdom of hindsight to me Jim...looking back at the mistakes of the past...also revelling in the glories, the lives and words of the great. Good write 😊

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John Prophet

”A generation is calling, these people aren't dead!”
Great line, a quality piece of work.

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Terry Reeves

Dear Jim,
I love this, beautiful poem -
it stirs the inner recesses of my soul!
Thank you.
Anne Reeves  (Terry's wife)
x

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Thank You Anne! I get lucky and get some inspiration every now and then,
 It is  both my sisters favorite and resonates with me as well. Thank you so much for reading my efforts! .................................Jim I was thinking this was Beyond the Veil, this poem is an actual experience with a vision, Thank You!

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Yiyan Han

Soaring with the wing of wisdom - wonderful piece, Jim!

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sparrowsong

Hello Jim...

I just saw this write...

​​​​​​I read it twice...

This is very enlightening...

​​​​​​Fantasic write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

 

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Thank You sparrowsong! honored by your assessment !...........Jim

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Shirley Rebstock

Very creative.  Love your wording.  I cannot come up with such elegant wording. 

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