Poem -
God please.
Sitting here alone,
Underneath the full moon,
Trying to think of something,
But there isn't any room,
My head is packed tight,
With do's the don'ts,
the wrong, the rights,
Just no space for thinking tonight,
I wish it had more room,
Fragments everywhere,
Sitting in the silence of cold air,
Thinking about nothing,
Still wanting to care,
God please ,
Do you have room to spare,
I'd be delighted,
if you could share,
Or clear a little space for me,
I'm so blinded lord,
I cannot see,
Oh i hope you hear thee.
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Hi Nardine, I know this feeling well.....racking your brain, but can't find any room...........well expressed, icould totally relate to this.............strong write my friend......tony.....xx
Hey sweetie pie, thanks heaps, love to you nardine xoxo
Hey Nardine,
This one, boast a lot of sincerity of the heart, spoken primarily from a heart so empty, to thoughts,rhymes are reason, yet despairingly so full, in yesterdays and today's things, left to have been undone but all for obvious and unabated reason have they, been left undone...Love this poem and the thought process you have release this from..... Speaks a heart of solitude, a state of being alone, without being lonely......by the poetess.....Enjoyed in its entirety but gravitated heavily to these selected lines,,,,,
Your dear friend,
Jim
Sitting here alone,
Underneath the full moon,
Trying to think of something,
But there isn't any room,
My head is packed tight,
With do's the don'ts,
the wrong, the rights,
&
God please ,
Do you have room to spare,
I'd be delighted,
if you could share,
Or clear a little space for me,
I'm so blinded lord,
I cannot see,
Oh i hope you hear thee.
Dearest Jimmy , thank you sweetheart, so many things going on in my mind right now,
seems there isn't much space for me, can't even make a simple decision, but another day tomorrow sweetie, all shall be well upon a good nights sleep,
love to you, thank you again dear friend, nardine xoxo
Hope all is well for you my dear friend. Upon approach, shall all your tomorrows, bring laughter and sun shine upon your face and all worries and woes, once felt the need to hinder your every progression in life, to be for ever dis-spelled, from your aching heart...You are an over-extended burn, of a candle, that sounds as though, you need to take some time for you and you only, Nardine. Even God had to take a break on the (7th) day, shouldn't you, dear lady?
Sleep well my friend,
Jim
Dearest Jimmy, i haven't had a real break in 13 years, time for me indeed, refocus, rejuvenation is most likely needed, thank you sweetheart for your compassion and support, you are a very loving soul jimmy,
love to you nardine xoxo
Sweety that is a beautiful and heart rending piece and I really want you to know that I`m here for you honey. He will make room in your heart, he needs you to listen to the light of your beautiful soul and everything will fall into it`s rightful place and let you experience peace once more. Remember you have many friends around you honey. This is a well written piece and shows pure talent in those words so well done. I love you sweetpea. G xx
Dearest my sweet Georgi girl, thank you , i am here for you also sweetie, for whatever you may need, at anytime , just holla, i too believe in all you have said sweetie, thank you from the depths of my soul, love you sweetheart, your friend Nardine xoxo