Poem -
Gone
Still see those looks in your eyes
cant catch the sound of your voice
still see those flashes of you
cant drive your scent away
you've left this ache
Β this pain that won't never cease
You were amazingΒ
but now you're gone
Still feel your presence around
cant seem to detached from you
still wonder what it was with youΒ
cant tell why you bother me so
you've left this space
this blank that never fills
you were so awesomeΒ
but now you're gone
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Hey CLEO!!.....I like the way you conveyed the sadness here with 'memory'!....the memory of the smells left behind, feeling the lingering presence, memories of voice and visions of the eyes...,,isn't it amazing how powerful those lingering memories are?.....and sometimes they can be SO strong that they cause you to do things you would NOT ordinarily do!!......a VERY compelling piece that speaks directly to the reader where those 'blanks' you mentioned can be filled in with their own experiences!!...,.ALL STARS!!.....well done dear poet sister!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?β³β΄β₯β???
Hi Tony, its hard to aspect this very part about the circle of life. It never gets easy. Thanks a lot. Warm regards.
So sad but hauntingly beautiful.Β
hi Lisa. Thanks for such a sweet words. Warm regards.
Sad yet beautifulΒ
you did a superb job so well done.?
Hi Keith, thanks a lot. Warm regards.