Gone but not forgot
Pupils pin
eyes roll back,
your body shakes
it needs the smack.
Your mind it leaves
it wonders off,
your brain is numb
your senses lost.
The dope is near
your veins they call,
they try to hide,
your skin
it crawls.
Sniff it
smoke it
slam it home.
you and the dope
are now alone.
A bit to much
and you don't come back,
your heart might stop
cause it's attacked.
Kiss your kids
and say goodnight,
this next trip
might just
end your life.
Senses soft
your no longer boss.
the dope it has you
at any cost.
Lose your job
lose your family
lose your mind
a triple whammy.
The devil
once he's on your back,
he don't want off
you've made a pact.
You live alone
in your vacant mind,
thoughts of love
and life
gone by.
Locked away
but not to late,
help your mind
revive it's fate.
It takes work
and sacrifice
to kill the devil
and this life.
Divorce this beast
as fast as you can,
get back to life
and being a man.
Look to tomorrow
and you will see
a brighter future
tha'ts drug free.
the run is over
time to get sober,
regain the chance
to grow
much older...
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Comments
Packed a powerful punch Black Reign. The rhyming and flow to your write is very good. The structure on the whole worked really well, not sure I wouldn't have elongated a few lines but that is maybe just being picky lol! Loved the piece as a whole, and you captured my attention right from the start, the opening section was brilliant
Great beat to it, particularly the highlighted part. great write. Vote and nom from me:)
Thank you so much Miss Rachel...
You are just brilliant my friend....
I take my hat off to you for bringing your soul to the table....
Courage goes a long way.....x Voting for you once again x
Thank you so much Carey......Michael
Good write, Good Rhymes, My applause & Congrats, Regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you ...one of my first....
A really well written and well thought through piece about a very tough subject. Great description and quite visual to the reader. Well done honey! I`m new to the site so I`m just finding my way through. Love G x
Thank you so much Miss Georgina...I only joined two days ago....
great write congrats x
Thank you Susan......Michael
Awesome and a superb write..Liked it..! congrats for your nom..well deserved..:)
Keep writing..!
Regards
Surabhi
Black Reign,
Superb,iV been there and in all honesty I still relapse back there.
I personally had to hit the gutter,and the gutters of Glasgow are not friendly.
when ur using your only pal is that monkey.!!!
If I had a wish it would be to be as strong as you
To are one clever,articulated guy,your poem really touched me,I'm going to put in under favourites if ok ?YOU said few words that were worth over 20 yrs of my life.
THANK YOU ,TO AN INSPIRATION.
SUZANNE SMITH
Thank you so much Suzanne...I've traded drugs for writing.....I will friend you when I figure out how...I only been on this site two days...
5*s from me
Maddison
Thank you so much Maddison....Michael
hi you definatly have a talent for writing ! you,ll definatly get more enjoyment from that than
being a drug user ! carry on the good work michael x
Thank you Tracy....much appreciated...
It must have cost you dear to write this, what a humbling insight into such a world Thank you
Thank you so much for your kind words Miss Anne.....