Hello JIMBOBJOE!!.....I found myself lost in the beautifully painted imagery you've delivered here....... the poem lives up to its Title VERY well with truly compelling phrasing and rhythmic timing ~
~ "Though being lost in scented moss
How marvelous the dream
Where shafts of white so quick to greet
The little flying things...."
Wow!!...... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.......ALL STARS!!..... well done dear poet sister/brother?...... and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!..............T xo. : )
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Very nice ?
thank u Marion!
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Hello JIMBOBJOE!!.....I found myself lost in the beautifully painted imagery you've delivered here....... the poem lives up to its Title VERY well with truly compelling phrasing and rhythmic timing ~
~ "Though being lost in scented moss
How marvelous the dream
Where shafts of white so quick to greet
The little flying things...."
Wow!!...... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.......ALL STARS!!..... well done dear poet sister/brother?...... and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!..............T xo. : )