Poem -
GOODBYE, MY FRIEND
You were once my light in the darkness...
The one I turned to who made things bright...
Knowing darkness together, just seeing it differently...
For awhile, I saw you as Godsend...
I knew He directed the path to you...
I asked for you to have faith enough to believe it too...
Maybe, I just didn't know just how deafening silence is...
I asked for more time but, knowing how that sometimes goes...
Some things are meant to be agreed by two...
Goodbye, my friend it's my time to go...
Returning to the Darkness...
Will I find another light that will just simply last longer?
I will surely ask, if I find it...
Now, I know the answer in the silence...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
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Brilliant piece of work
Hello Kieran...
Thank you very much for your kind comment and generous support my friend!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hi sparrow song , very beautiful piece of work ! I’ve been away too long . I will catch up this week . Hope all is well with you , rock
Hello L. Barto...
I think I should start handing out knives and the one that doesn't stab me would be the one who may never stab me...
I get stabbed more without it, so if at first you don't succeed in finding out the truth before the lies grow into a Field of flowers, try, try again maybe, it could actually be edible...
While I'm alive, I will hunt for the good...
Thank you for your kind comment and support my friend!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hello Dblankportrait...
Absolutely, they'd even be the first to tell you, don't tell me you're cold or hungry because you'd leave over full and sweating...
When people call me friend and I do too, that's as good as shaking hands on a deal...
It's all in the Character...
People say another chance?
Yeah, if I want to become more burnt than I already am...
When I do, I will certainly let you know...
Until then, the mistake is on you...
Thank you for your kind comment and support my friend!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
This was written with eloquence and heart. This is what I like most about your writing, it has so much heart. Very well done
Thanks
Greg
Hello Soul Sis...
That doesn't always mean Goodbye...
Usually, it's I'm going to miss you...
You talk about looking forward to talking to them again...
When Life happens like that, it's a sadness but, it's still care and concern for each other...
We didn't hurt one another...
There's a difference...
A good friend is like a fine treasure, just sometimes it's not appreciated by the one who holds the key and they lose it and when then they find it again it may just rusted shut...
Silence is whatever it is...
Thank you for your sweet comment and support my friend!
luv & hugs
sparrowsong
Hello Rock...
Hope all is well with you too...
Thank you very much for your kind comment and support!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
A really nice piece of writing as always sparrowsong!!
Hello Sis Cherie...
To trust another's lantern too much could be not a real good choice...
I trust my lantern and it let's me know when it's going dim and why...
Thank you for your kind comment and support!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hello Greg...
Thank you for those very kind words...
Thank you for your support...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
A beautiful piece Sparrowsong
Hello Keith...
Thank you for your kind words and support!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hello Penny...
Very kind of you...
Thank you very much for your comment and support!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
I re read this so beautiful