Poem -
Green Valleys
The green valleys of life have turned gray
The once green grass in dismay
The herd of obedient lambs feeble
The moon in position
The sun away
Distant
Though they are of one source of light
Yet they can't coexist
One yearns to arouse the night
One yearns to awaken the dawn
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Comments
Shirley P.
I wish to highlight the ending lines. Beautiful Shirley, Thanks for sharing.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI
short yet sweet, now I remember what I'm missing from not reading others poetry.
Thanks William, its great seeing you back on Cosmofunnel.
Thanks Russell, glad you liked it.
Heyy Shirley
Liked ur short awesome write..!! Great thoughts..:)
Keep Writing
Love
Surabhi..:)
Shirley,
Great write, i also love your outlook on life.
Regards Mark. x
Shirley you have a beautiful aura around you always ,would love to see you regular here again as your work just enlightens me and others. beautiful piece! tina x
The true queen of poetry, has once again dawned herself upon our doorsteps...As always Shirley, your poems are truly enlightening and always has a positive message attached.....Such too, does this one..
High Regards,
Jim
Thanks Jimmy,
You give me too much credit and you humble me.
Poetess Shirley,
Congrats on your winning nomination, My applause and appreciation
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI