Poem -
Grey Day On A Sunlit Floor
I watched you
And saw
That you did not take a breath
Wake up I said, wake up
And I saw you strain to break that
rest
Saw your spirit... almost,
Shine within
Though your eyes were marble
still
And I know you tried to stay with
us
I could feel your iron will
Wake up I said, wake up, wake up
Then I kissed your icy hand
But a mother's love is paultry son
When God gives a command
M P 29/1/22
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Comments
My goodness MARION!!......STUNNING!!.......great writing!!......PINNED!!......no words my friend!!.........lots of Love!!......T xo
Thanks so much Tony my friend X
Made me catch my breath to read this Marion. Just achingly sad and traumatic ❤️Hugs xx
Many hugs to you love ❤
Tears! This poem is so full of emotion and paints a vivid picture of total heartbreak. Excellent, truly, truly excellent writing ✍ xx
Your comments are so appreciated my friend...hugs to.you Tina 💖