"Groovy! said Josephine." (a rewrite inspired by Curtis Longstreet)

She was layin' down real low
Listenin' to 'ol Satchmo blow
With colored people clappin'
"Hey, 'ol Grady's kinda groovy!"
"So cool!"....said Josephine
The back streets there, they be thumpin'
Waitin' on heathens humpin'
Flyin' in the face of the master, man
"Hey, give me back my car!!"
Softly, said Josephine....
Now, why a woman spend all night waitin'
Ain't like they be out back debatin'
Said the 'ol colored man at the bar
"I know, she out there sellin' that tar.."
Said, Josephine.....
Brother Billy by the back door
Pursed his lips around his girl
His shiny, glowin', horn
"Let's JAM, little sister girl!!"
"Groovy!.....said Josephine....
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Comments
I loved it. It was an enjoyable read sweety well done. I love you both. G xx
Georgie, you're my angel as always......can't sleep?........still it's nice to see you around at this time........smiles....T xx
Good write Brother Tony Taylor,
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVEL (Brother)
Hi Mr. Maveli......once again you find your way right to favorite lines........thanx so much my brother........your friend and admirer...........TÂ xx
Good Verse, My applause
Regards
Nimmy Williams
Thank you kindly Nimmy Williams, .........I appreciate that you have taken the time to stop and read me........love that you enjoyed it............smiles.......tony xx
Kinda feeling this one I like it ,keep up the good work