Ground Shaking

Every ground shaking tear means I shan't sleep.
The vacuous feeling controlling me runs deep !
You cannot be ready for an anguish such as this.
All I have to reflect on is everything I will miss !
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You were part of me for as long as I remember.
How do I live without all I perceived to matter ?
I crave desperately to look at life as I used to !
How much longer could heartbreak continue ?
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What I thought would last was only temporary.
Shall I cling on to each crystal clear memory ?
You were the one I put above anyone on earth.
Now, it's on my own I am required to set forth !
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Hi Richard You write the feelings felt
when you know you are going to lose someone
you love where it be in love loss or through
a death maybe of a loved one in both
cases I could relate
Great write!
Warmest wishes Debs
So pleased you liked this one as I put a lot of effort into it.
Thanks for leaving such a considered remark.
:) Best wishes to you !
Hello Romeo...
This is sad and heartbreaking...
This is different from you for sure...
No matter what you write you know to touch a heart...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs. :)
sparrowsong
Hug !
Thanks for being there !
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Very nice poem about heartbreak and the racing thoughts of how you go on without them. I love the beginning of the poem it really flows well.
So pleased you liked this one !
Best wishes to you ! :)