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Ground Shaking

Ground Shaking

Every ground shaking tear means I shan't sleep.

The vacuous feeling controlling me runs deep !

You cannot be ready for an anguish such as this.

All I have to reflect on is everything I will miss !

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You were part of me for as long as I remember.

How do I live without all I perceived to matter ?

I crave desperately to look at life as I used to !

How much longer could heartbreak continue ?

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What I thought would last was only temporary.

Shall I cling on to each crystal clear memory ?

You were the one I put above anyone on earth.

Now, it's on my own I am required to set forth !

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Richard You write the feelings felt 
when you know you are going to lose someone 
you love where it be in love loss or  through 
a death maybe of a loved one in both
cases I could relate 
Great write! 
Warmest wishes Debs  
 

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Richard Waters

So pleased you liked this one as I put a lot of effort into it.

Thanks for leaving such a considered remark.

:)  Best wishes to you !

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sparrowsong

Hello Romeo...

This is sad and heartbreaking...

This is different from you for sure...

No matter what you write you know to touch a heart...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs. :)

sparrowsong 

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Natalie Reynolds

Very nice poem about heartbreak and the racing thoughts of how you go on without them. I love the beginning of the poem it really flows well. 

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Richard Waters

So pleased you liked this one !

Best wishes to you !  :)

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