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Tony Taylor

You're so awesome!!!.... How I miss your intensity.... and pure poetic joy!!..... Love you......Hello to Jason!!..... call me!!.......T xo ???♥♥♥

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Valerie Lynn

Hello T good to hear from you!! Haha poetic joy you're so silly!! ? Hope you are well! I will tell him! Sending message now!! ? 

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Dean Kuch

Wow, Valerie.
I'm sure glad I'm not the one on the receiving end of this berating birthday greeting.
On second thought, greeting may not be the appropriate word to use in this instance.
Birthday beating might be better.
I ran across your work completely by accident and I'm glad I did.
With decaying bodies, red blood spilling, and insane voices inside one's head—what's not to like?
Pleasant Screams,
Well penned.
~Dean Kuch ☠️??
 

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you Dean for the read and comment. Happy you enjoyed!! Was just playing around with this one!! ?? More soon to come!! 

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Dean Kuch

You're welcome, Valerie. I look forward to reading more.
~Dean  :)

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