Happy Birthday Mom

Hello, Good Morning Mom.
I'm leaving soon it wont be long,
Everyday there's work that's due
and
after the dawn I'm still not through
and
though I'm queit and don't say much,
I still love you
and I'll keep in touch.
*silent* It's noon mom.
I'm not here, but..
I spent my time with you everyday,
it was always warm and we would play
I will always hold my childhood as something dear
I'll be far away but in my heart you will be near
Good evening mom, i go to my room.
On to the next thing my mind fills with gloom
the future and its problems seem to me unfair
but i know in the end you will always be there.
Thank you for growing me strong,
I love you and happy birthday Mom.
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Hey ENOCH!!.....this definitely reads aloud as a song......strong sense of rhythm and timing in your delivery......and I LOVE the way you formatted this.....makes it easy for the reader to follow this most compelling story line.....a strong narrative......well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered.....well done....and ......WELCOME to COSMO!!......ALL STARS!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✳✴☀
Thanks Tony bologna.
Enoch very nice poem.
Thank you elociN.
Enoch Okay LOL you spelled my name backwards and in my last statement to your other poem or statement "What the hell is this site", I wasn't trying to offend you or downgrade your work because I read your response to my comment but usually I don't comment at all on social media or either sites like this but people tell me to give it a try or to be more social but this is the main reason why I don't like commenting on anything online because I don't like to offend people in any sort of way just by voicing my opinion but most of all I don't like going back in forth with someone when people can agree to disagree on things and it seems everyone takes stuff to personal when things aren't really that serious. It's way more important things going on in the world besides us posting whatever, whether it's art, poetry, dreams, etc.... Things aren't that serious especially people voicing there opinion or FACTS. But keep enjoying this site and your work of course and personally I would care less if someone said my work wasn't a painting or drawing because I just don't care that much as long as I have confidence in myself and my work I really don't care to much what anyone else thinks especially very negative people. I'm in a positive space and I'm going to stay there and I didn't type this long message to be smart or sarcastic just to make a point to you or anyone else who reads my positive message. :) :) :) :)
"People voicing there opinion or FACTS."
OK I think I will now admit the joke that was me defending a silly rant as a poem, but the "FACTS" in all capitals struck me with so much attitude in contrast to the rest of your comment. Which I found amusing xD but I didn't expect to provoke such a long message! Was just joking around my dude I hope I didn't bring you any negativity lol
I meant to type back and forth, sorry for that error I do know how to spell. Just correcting my grammar in my message to Enoch.