Poem -

Happy Birthday Mom

Happy Birthday Mom

Hello, Good Morning Mom.

I'm leaving soon it wont be long,

Everyday there's work that's due

and

after the dawn I'm still not through

and 

though I'm queit and don't say much,

I still love you

and I'll keep in touch.

*silent* It's noon mom.

I'm not here, but..

I spent my time with you everyday,

it was always warm and we would play

I will always hold my childhood as something dear

I'll be far away but in my heart you will be near

Good evening mom, i go to my room.

On to the next thing my mind fills with gloom

the future and its problems seem to me unfair

but i know in the end you will always be there.

Thank you for growing me strong,

I love you and happy birthday Mom.

Like 3 Pin it 0
Support CosmoFunnel.com

Support CosmoFunnel.com

You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.

Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
Tony Taylor

Hey ENOCH!!.....this definitely reads aloud as a song......strong sense of rhythm and timing in your delivery......and I LOVE the way you formatted this.....makes it easy for the reader to follow this most compelling story line.....a strong narrative......well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered.....well done....and ......WELCOME to COSMO!!......ALL STARS!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo  ?✳✴☀

Reply
author
Enoch

Thanks Tony bologna.

Reply
author
Enoch

Thank you elociN.

Reply
author
Nicole Burrell

Enoch Okay LOL you spelled my name backwards and in my last statement to your other poem or statement "What the hell is this site", I wasn't trying to offend you or downgrade your work because I read your response to my comment but usually I don't comment at all on social media or either sites like this but people tell me to give it a try or to be more social but this is the main reason why I don't like commenting on anything online because I don't like to offend people in any sort of way just by voicing my opinion but most of all I don't like going back in forth with someone when people can agree to disagree on things and it seems everyone takes stuff to personal when  things aren't really that serious. It's way more important things going on in the world besides us posting whatever, whether it's art, poetry, dreams, etc....  Things aren't that serious especially people voicing there opinion or FACTS. But keep enjoying this site and your work of course and personally I would care less if someone said my work wasn't a painting or drawing because I just don't care that much as long as I have confidence in myself and my work I really don't care to much what anyone else thinks especially very negative people. I'm in a positive space and I'm going to stay there and I didn't type this long message to be smart or sarcastic just to make a point to you or anyone else who reads my positive message. :) :) :) :)

Reply
author
Enoch

"People voicing there opinion or FACTS." 

OK I think I will now admit the joke that was me defending a silly rant as a poem, but the "FACTS" in all capitals struck me with so much attitude in contrast to the rest of your comment. Which I found amusing xD but I didn't expect to provoke such a long message! Was just joking around my dude I hope I didn't bring you any negativity lol

Reply
author
Nicole Burrell

I meant to type back and forth, sorry for that error I do know how to spell. Just correcting my grammar in my message to Enoch.

Reply
Poem -

esuoh eht ni yroC

esuoh eht ni yroC

Cory your skin is a chocolate brown.
But your life changed when you moved into town.
Taking...

Poem -

What the hell is this weird...

How the hell did all these people find this site? I literally typed in google "submitting poetry" and this...

Latest poems in Lyric, Song, Sonnet, Tragedy, Verse

Poem -

Toxic traits

Did your ears burn
Cause it was mostly about you
A little bit about what I got up to
...

Poem -

HUMANS DON'T DESERVE ....

HUMANS DON'T DESERVE . . . . . .

I gave you all a beautiful world and what did you do?
you fucked it up with continual disasters in...

Poem -

Nothing

Broken

Nothing

Some say I'm strong,
But I am breaking,
Life leaves me shaking.

Some look at me and...

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com