hatred
When I look at you
I can feel the hatred bubbling up inside
When I look at you
And you eyes lock with mine
I know you can see the disgust in my eyes
And yes I know you're there walking arm in arm with my best friend
How could you
She was mine
And now she is following you around like a lost puppy
She is even talking like you
Telling me everything I suck at
Telling me it was I that had left her
She doesn't even care for my feelings
Doesn't notice when I'm upset
But worst of all she denies our friendship
So to you I say, when you ask why I hate you
Read this poem and then you'll understand
Cause what if I did this to you
Made your friends turn their backs on you
Pushed you aside like a sack of potatoes
I HATE YOU
I just want to scream and shove you against a wall
But at last I gain my sanity back
But yet I still hold in that hatred
Thanks a lot for teaching me the true feeling of hatred
Dedicated to my one and only person who managed to make me absolutely dislike them.
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i am sorry i wrote this but i had to get my feelings out somehow and now i feel better
Hi Krystyn
I like your rant in poetry! a few typos though. I hope I don't sound critical. I don't mean to be.
Thank you, its ok, im going to go back and fix the typos im just not in the mood to do it. Know what I mean?
Hatred is a very powerful emotion, but as a poet sometimes you have to put the feeling aside. typos makes the artist sound illiterate. again I am giving an honest critic and am not trying to be over critical.
Thank you again I will fix the typos. Im sorry.
Krystyn, I liked the passion and honesty of the write, perhaps a little over the top, by that's not a bad thing in poetry, it's the 'hatred' part, that is a very powerful emotion, the write is actually terrific though, good flow and the theme was threaded well, and besides, the most important thing is that it read well, the reader felt the anger, keep writing, good stuff....cheers,
I love it. Anger and hatred make amazing emotions for inspiration. It's ok if it was a rant, but you wrote your truest feelings. I love it when I read pure emotional pieces. It's an excellent read!