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He

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Susan O'Reilly
He

He promised me ecstasy
I got sausage and chips
He promised me kisses twee
too short on my lips
He got down on one knee
couldn’t get up with his hips
he promised me he was free
my ear his girl clips

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Ravindra Kumar

Marvelous. Symbolic outlook with personification.

Regards,

Ravindra Kumar

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Tina Moore

LOL  some promises are def  not what we think -good piece susan. Tina x

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