" He Knows EVERYTHING You've Done.."

Do you think that if we, had been as He
That God may just rewrite
The story of our lives, as honey from beehives
Dripping with the glory in the light
Which then soothes the soul, and nurtures control
Lending warmth on wint'ry nights
And spirituality's ear, waiting for a whisper here
From the truth he provides, inside...
Such a crime it is, therefore in this
This bliss, where we hope to dwell
To pray to God, for the selfish nod
To avoid the fires of Hell
Such a crime it is, to play with Godly gifts
As if we deserve His love
Without giving freely, or spreading His greeting
For He knows EVERYTHING you've done...
Pray ~ understand
That in the end,
Waits
The place,
Where ~ You
Truly,
Begin...
Tony Taylor (Chicago)

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This is a Deep Thinking One Tony...
If God rewrote our lives...
Umm Interesting...
Sounds Great only if...
I didn't have to start completely over again and have
learn from...
Different mistakes...
No matter what there is only One Perfect One...
sparrowsong
Hey Sparrow!!.......I agree with you wholeheartedly ~ there is ONLY one perfect one ~ I love everything about your involvement here on Cosmo.......such a pleasure having you here ~ you have a way of always making me smile.......and trust me.......it's not always that easy to do..........thanx for this my friend.......smiles.........T xo
Hey T, brilliant write my bro. damn, I must hurry it's almost midnight; I never come on here after midnight; if I can avoid it, and yes I'm aware how weird that sounds....Such a theme you cover here my friend, and so fair and reasonable an argument you make, wow my eyes popped out when I saw the pull quoted lines below; 'the selfish nod' of having our actions justified, instead of just saying to God, sorry I messed up; I'm not perfect I can stumble, please forgive me, show me how to do better next time....doesn't seem very hard, but who knows if pride won't take 90% of us to hell...T you're simply a brilliant poet and thinker and I love reading your beautiful thoughts, have a good night pal....cheers
'To pray to God, for the selfish nod
To avoid the fires of Hell'
Hi love these lines, "to avoid the fire of hell, it is such a crime to play with godly gifts" hell is a place everyone should pray to avoid. A place of no escape.
Stephanie!!.......it's so nice to hear from you my friend...........and I agree with you.......prayer is so important ~ in so many ways..............thanx for the lovely comment Miss Naidoo..........smiles........T xo
Hey brother T, I agree, the Lord sees everything, and I like to believe, that even when I do a good deed in silence he hears it and from that honesty blooms violets and roses of miracles, I've seen some crazy coincidence happen that I can't explain, with any other explanation than the only one worth speculating one, another great write 5 stars my friend
CO