Poem -
Heart Labor
Heart Labor
In the space between
passion's inferno
and comfortable familiarity
I lost her
Or at least misplaced
my life mate
Absence happens
Love is never
a constant stream
It has it's
ebbs and flow
Love even runs dry at times
but you know
it's ALWAYS there
Probably? Maybe?
In theory??
Somewhere beneath
layers of neglect
Time dilutes us all
causing lovers to forget
what brought them together
and the effort required
to maintain theoretical
forever love
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Well done Steve another great piece from your magic fingers. G x
Well done Steve another great piece from your magic fingers. G x
Hey Steve, I was checking out some of your pieces and I wanted to comment on this........it is free from overwriting, it doesn't waste any time or effort, it flows like dream and it expresses something that everyone can relate to. It is incredibly difficult to maintain a relationship in these modern times where everyone seems to be craving there freedom. This was so well expressed and heartfelt...........great write my friend....well done............5*s.....tony
Thank Tony for your very humbling words... I have zero formal training as a writer so perhaps that's a blessing for me (sometimes at least) as I try to focus on substance and never agonize over form or style
Well written, Congrats
WILLIAMSJI
Thank you sir for the much appreciated support