Poem - 27 January 2016, 11:23

Heaven

Richard Waters

Whenever you draw near, I'm in heaven

I sense a change inside, a peace within

Whenever your body is laying against me

Without words, I understand completely.

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Your warmth and comfort is everything

Your loving ways touch my entire being

Taking me to a glorious state of mind

Where the fulfilment of purest love I find.

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I'm in heaven when you gaze into my eyes

Making a declaration no heart or soul denies

That we will share always what we have here

That this bond between us will never disappear.

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Tony Taylor27 January 2016, 12:15

Excellent word choices & phrasing Sir Richard!!.........adding up to a "Slice of Heaven" (smiles)...........this really has great flow and comes trippingly off the tongue (once again)...........smokin' grooves my friend..............Love and Rockets!!............T xo

Richard Waters27 January 2016, 12:19

Your appraisal of my poetry always means a lot !

So pleased you enjoyed this. :)

Take care my friend !

Bradford27 January 2016, 13:45

Hey Richard. It is an amazing thing to be lying on together with hearts beating as one . To be in the arms you love is so relaxing and fun . You painted a beautiful picture with your words . A great write. Hugs to you rock

Richard Waters27 January 2016, 14:22

Thank you for your kind words.
You understand the true happiness of being in love !
Take care my friend ! :)

Christopher Correia27 January 2016, 20:47

you write so pure, Richard; not a word wasted or thought out of place, I enjoyed this poem very much; and how could any reader not enjoy it? It is perfectly expressed...cheers, my friend

Richard Waters27 January 2016, 20:50

Thank you for your kind words !

Take care ! :)