Heaven Nine-Eleven

Final flight,
Fire light,
Conflagrate.ย
Separate.
Tower splendid.
Tower tall.
Power made
The tower fall
One and all,
Call and call
Cry and scream
And bleed and crawl.
Make a name.
Maybe fame.
But all's the same.
Once tamed by flame.
Children learn.
Lovers yearn.
Disturbed.
Perturbed,
Their turn to burn
Comes quick
And sick...
A black attack,
Yet still, in fact
The plan's
Intact.
For motivation.
Of a nation.
In patriotic
Desperation.
A spate of hate.
Divided state.
All that was clear is far from near.
A state of fear.
Cannot obtain.
Cannot maintain.
And can't restrain.
Yet can't remain.
Without a clue.
Of what is true
Or what to do
The one they trust.
Through power lust.
Left empty holes
Where hearts he thrust
A hollow gust
Blows lies and dust
Into the eyes of the sane and just
Insane, unjust
They start to fear
The world, the place
They once revered.
The rubble's weathered
The blood hasย cleared
The end seems near
Is heaven here?
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wow ย great write kundai ย every word of the truth draws the reader straight in to the true story of this ย good rhyme and reason ย tina x
thanks,theres no greater sense of accomplishment than when your message is true and recieved x :)
great write x
thanks Susan x
wow....that gave me chills. i wrote a 9-11 poem too. it was no where near this good though. You truely are an amazing writer. thank you for sharing this i enjoyed it very much
Thank you Danielle. I'm glad I could invoke such a feeling in you. and as long as the message was clear and true, your poem is every bit as good as any other x :)
hey
can't find your 9-11 poem.
where can i read it?
kundai
hey Danielle
where can i read your 9-11 poem?
I really like this, I could see the story inside my head. Perfect poem!
No that I like the story behind the poem, but you know what I mean.
i know exactly what you mean Ms Westwick!
Thank you so much x
Chilling and insightful. I enjoyed reading it.
Thanks Brother. max appreciate.
A heavy subject matter carefullyย
woven for the heart; this is very goodย
therefore I have nominated;ย
my best wishes to you Kundai,ย
jai :)ย