A clever short write. Could be read in two ways. The first time I read it, I read the last line as though they were giving up. Then I read again and realised it could be that they are tired of people dying, of life constantly ceasing to be. Both are equally painful to read and the double meaning I found in this, just adds to the weight of the entire piece. Therefor a very apt title
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Hi Marion
A clever short write. Could be read in two ways. The first time I read it, I read the last line as though they were giving up. Then I read again and realised it could be that they are tired of people dying, of life constantly ceasing to be. Both are equally painful to read and the double meaning I found in this, just adds to the weight of the entire piece. Therefor a very apt title
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Thanks so much Gwen, your observations and feedback are greatly appreciated xx
if it were not for the lump already in my throat, I would say this was responsible for it .. sadly, near perfect Marion x
Thankyou Neville ...appreciated my friend x