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Her

There's a strength in theĀ 
Standard of writing that doesn'tĀ 

Weaken to let the head go

Beneath the water:

The accidental daughterĀ 

Whose father aims himself as an

Arrow.

Ā 

Her poetry written with theĀ 

Precision of a hand whose reachĀ 

Into the future is of promisingĀ 

Potential.

She's even bilingual.

Can't people who know only oneĀ 

Language master English?

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Rory McGinlay

* an old poem which seems relevant to how prolific people seem to be. Guys, I'm running out of material!Ā 

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Neville

that'll be the english for ya .. systematically shafted from all directions & having once ruled the waves for centuries, now left to the wither and fade almost into almost oblivion .. I nevertheless am proud to be a patriot and shall always fly the cross of saint George .. and therein lies the reason why we are not good at languages, not even our own .. too lazy

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Rory McGinlay

My retorts are honesty taking longer and longer: or to others who somewhat are referred to as the mining outposts call it, The remnants of The Empire. Sorry. I'm a RepublicanĀ 

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Neville

We all have our cross to bearĀ 

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Shirley Harrison

Ah Admiration indeed, she sounds quite special. šŸŒ¹ Molto bello šŸŒ¹

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Rory McGinlay

In point of fact, from Cosmo, wouldn't you know? Japanese, if I remember, with excellent command of English.Ā 

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Marion

I only know one language...bad English with a lot of 'F' words. I don't even know my own language as the English( one for Nev) banned us from using it a while ago now lol. I believe you are Irish Rory and must have a similar complaint about the potatoes....and other stuff. Now back to your poem, which I haven't a clue to but

'The accidental daughter
Whose father aims himself as an
Arrow.'
is a stunning line...well 3 and I wish I'd thought of it and written it in Welsh which I can't speak. Hugs to all of you...Great convo x

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