~ HER CONFIDENCE ~
When, in time,
One finds a bounty of light,
It can be difficult to recognize
Especially amid her quiet conditioning
A rare radiance
Soaring,
Far above everything else
Like the sun itself
Smiling,
From the backdrop of perfect days
Where hours are lit
And shine from within
The moments
Of her pure concentration,
And the uncanny blue moonlight
That emanates
From her inner universe,
And celestial
Experiences...
With the music of her subtle vibration
Floating gently through
Her private rooms,
Defining the elegance
Of another day
Within her charismatic light,
Growing warmer,
Brighter
Than the day before,
Where her ebullience
Begins
Hinting at itself
In artistic fashion,
Like the Northern Lights
Painting the spectrum
Of cosmic hallucinations
And,
Defining for the world
What has been hers forever
A hidden confidence
Struggling
To be heard,
A ubiquitous light
Tethered together
With her thoughts
And actions,
Filling the night sky
With the quintessential light
That is hers alone
And is born each time
She reveals
A smile.....
Tony Taylor
* for a friend in need....
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wonderful poem Tony
Thank you SO MUCH Greg!!.....your comment is GREATLY appreciated my friend!!......smiles.......T xo : )
You are so welcome you should read my new poem
Beautifully written my poetic penfriend ❤️
Why thank you my friend!!....lots of hugs-n-stuff!!....smiles....T xo : )
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Tony this is utterly adorable...work of a true master. I can almost see this ghost like lady...humble and quiet and struggling...you have written the essence of a beautiful spirit as perceived by one who has the sight to see her, truly see her. I have changed my mind on my favourite write if yours...this has to be it...you have true talent for putting words together to evoke wisps of deep emotion in the reader...outstanding work...💕
Holy Crap!!!....that has to be one of my favorite comments EVER!!......you rock my friend.......I am ever so humbled dear poet sister~ and I thank you, ever so much, from the bottom of my heart!!......I am your ever friend......and I Thank you ever so much Kind Lady!!....Tons of hugs and tons of kisses about the cheek and face!! (smiles).......your ever friend!!.......TONY!! Big Smiles! T xo : )
Wow Tony I sense you see more in your friend than she does in herself. A confidence that lays waiting to be recognised. Yet you see and see so much more also. I think this has to be one of the most attentive writes I have read. Eloquently penned from the eyes of someone who sees deeply into this person. There is a feeling of true admiration. What an amazing friend you are to write such words for another. I agree with Marion, this is my favourite of your writes so far
Your good friend
Gwen x
Wow!! ~ What is going on here today....there must be something in the water! (smiles).......Thank you so much GWEN!! You have helped me to understand the importance of simply saying the truth whenever possible!! I do always look forward to your comments my friend......you are such an inspiration to us all here on Cosmo!.....just like Marion ~ "You Rock" girlfriend!! (smiles)......stay groovy sister girl!!....and PLEASE!! never leave!!.......Big fat wonderful smiles!!....your ever friend !!......T xo : )
wow Tony! your gift reveals the gift of another!........................................Jim
Thank you so much JIM The Lad!! (smiles)......you are too kind!!.....more smiles......T xo : )
Tony and what a good and dear friend you yourself are towards this woman.
To write from your heart and so lovingly, for almost a spirit entity and almost just out of reach on the edge of one's peripheral vision.
And what a vision it is you have presented, kindly and graciously so for others to be bowled over by.
Beautifully well written, forlorn and haunting all delivered in wave after wave of elegant and eloquent poetry.
A great write by a true master of the craft.
Superb sir!
Like the hidden in this poem and how it resonates the lonely.
I hadn't thought of that LILIANA!! ~ "It resonates with the lonely..".....awesome.....thank you tons!!......smiles.....T xo : )
As usual Tony, a work of art.👍🏼
Tony the picture art work blends beautifully with your words as does your view of your friend. Thanks for sharing this well written piece.
Thank you so much SUSAN!!......the fact that you recognized the "Artwork" working and blending with the poetry is so important to me.....stay groovy dear poet sister!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
this is most deserving of the full marks and associated awards that this mere mortal can apply .......... outstanding sir :)