" HER FAMILIAR TIMBRE "
There's something in the way she speaks to me
A gorgeous gentleness in her tone
A familiar timbre to her pitch, that makes my hyper-sensitive
Nature, feel at home
She's like gloves, on my fingers feeling her sensitivity,
Deeply, in her most refined qualities
With more than words, I touch the gist of her
A regal etching engraved, with electric dignity
She's like a glittering, Broadway, show tune
Filled with ebullient champagne melodies
A televised dance number
Filled with sexy, steamy, intricacies
Leading, to the most diamond-like brilliance
Of her blunt, yet perfect advice
She's everything, in rarities resilience
Grander than a mountain range's, snowy ice
She's the illusionary girl,
From my dream-like fantasies and lore
She's the girl I'd search for
If I were a knight in shining armor,
She's the perfection in a heartbeat
Pulsing its way through the bloodstream of my youth
Like temptation, dripping from a golden spoon
She's the golden honey, in life's perfect honeymoon
And every time I hear her words
It affords me a heavenly shiver,
For something, far beyond this earth
Created, her familiar timbre...
Tony Taylor. (Chicago)
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Hi Tony Wow This is gorgeous I love every word
if this lady were real she`d be a luck lady to be thought
of in the way you have written about her the tone of her
voice being the music to your ears
Beautiful !!
I just love it 10 stars love n hugs Debs xo
Yay!! ~ Thanx DEBS ~ 10 stars!!....... unbelievable......... you're the coolest sweetheart......I Love your comments Madame A.O.M!!.........I did work hard on this........ took me a while to get the metering right.......... but you nailed it......." Music to my ears".......... smiles.......T xo
Well now T, to be completely honest and I have tead a ton of your writes.....this one goes up there an the elite and you should be very proud of this I know I would. If your name was blank on these words I would have never guessed it written by you, very different style and way you portrayed love. To me you felt the words to page rather than printed them, the undying expression of what a true love soul mate is to a person like a nature it has it's own flowing Symphony and the effects of all that is pleasure and taken in just falls in to place. I always find it so incredibly fascinating how much the musician clashes wiyh the poet in your highly romantic writes. Pinned my friend. A wonderfully spectacular piece.
"Pulsing its way through the bloodstream of my youth"
Peace big bro. Ttyl.
Yay!! ~ Thanx DEVON!!......I had a feeling that this one would catch you off guard...... love the poet clashing with the musician comment man!!........ and you were right about this all-around....... so cool that you pinned it......... made my afternoon!!.......thanx again for the inspirational message.......... your brother in words!!.......... peace.....T xo
Hello Tony...
Beautiful write!
Many hearts are breaking all over the world tonight...
You sound like a man in love...
You are off the market?
Hugz and Smiles!
Feathers
Hey FEATHERS!!.......thanx so much for that way cool comment....... flattery will get you everywhere!! (my dad used to say that ALL the time!)........ and NO...... no hearts are breaking..... everyone who knows me well....... knows what's up!!........ you're cool.......thanx for this!!....... smiles.......T xo
I really don't have alot to say about this but my heart is hurting deeply and this is not helping,
WOW!! This is just such a beautifully well written love letter to the lucky lady in your life! I take it that love is definitely in the air in Chicago!
Well done my darling this piece just fizzes with energy!
I love you
G xx
Ps. I wish someone would write me a love letter like that!!
YAY!! ~ thanx GEORGIE!!...... that was such an awesome comment girlfriend..... especially the ~ "...fizzes with energy " part!!......I Love you too sweetie!!....... and I know how many people Love you....... your life is filled with Love letters!!....... you reap what you sew!!...... and you my friend....... spread the Love EVERYWHERE!!........thanx for this!!........ your Beasty Boy.....T xo
My Poetic Genius Brother,
Another masterpiece! I used to travel and visit the finest museums in America to view them, like the Metropolitan, The Frick and The National Gallery, to name a few. But, thanks to you, I can now stay at home and merely have to read one of your priceless works of art.
Much respect, your poetic soulmate,
Larry
He'll LARRY!!... YOUR comments are masterpieces!!....... I'm starting a gallery of my own!!..... called....... The RAN Institute Of Art!!....... that is...... the art of making friends!! (smiles).... and the masterpieces of newly wielded words!!........ you're too friggin' cool brother!!........hugs-n-high fives!!........T xo
Hi My Dear Tony,
I think we should make plans to break ground for this museum together. It will be replete with The Masterpieces that you have created, and your most ardent critics comments, extoling their beauty, and exhorting the world to visit, and be enveloped by their charm.
Peace, Love and Rockets, My Poetic Brother,
xox Larry
Ps. That was supposed to be "HELL LARRY!!" ~ NOT he'll........smiles
Well now this is a masterpeice Tony! What a pure gift! A modern Solomon with the knack to describe a woman in ways an ordinary man can not! I loved this poem the words seemed whimsical and floated through my mind as I soaked in this poem. Absolutely beautiful Tony! My favorite lines were:
"She's the girl I'd search for
If I were a knight in shining armor,
She's the perfection in a heartbeat
Pulsing its way through the bloodstream of my youth
Like temptation, dripping from a golden spoon
She's the golden honey, in life's perfect honeymoon
And every time I hear her words
It affords me a heavenly shiver,
For something, far beyond this earth
Created, her familiar timbre..."
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