~ HER LIFE'S DANCE ~
Awakening
She found she was still dreaming,
Still sleeping
A long and lavender-lidded sleep,
This delicately constructed purgatory
Between being asleep and just 'being',
Began to make some sense.
With a sudden burst of cloud-like upheaval
Her mind shattered the roof of glassy conception,
She sat straight up within her bed
And she swore in an intimate prayer,
That she'd truly tasted being dead.
She'd been reborn into life's dance
A symbiotic ballet of truthful romance,
Facing a wall of force-fed comprehension
A mini-minuet 'twixt elegance and tension,
A most dazzling display of light in the darkness
Shining blades of bluntness sizzling into sharpness,
She swore, never again,
Never again would she take for granted
The gift of wonder found in sleep supplanted,
By the watchful eye within life's dance
By the wisdom found in taking a chance,
By the restorative nature of morphing scenes
And the genius of life's dance,
Found deep in her dreams...
Tony Taylor
*The Falcon
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i loved it..i really became sad reading to the end because i wanted to hear more,its such a lovely piece
Wow!! Thanx CHANTE!!....I haven't heard from you for quite some time.....a year maybe?.....I hope all is well with you and yours......I'm gonna head to your page now and see if you've written anything lately.....Again, so good to hear from you.....I'm always interested in your impressions on my stuff!!....Stay groovy dear poet sister!!......and thanx for the kind review!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Ps....so cool that you landed on my page right on my Birthday!! (YAY!!)
Hi Tony...this is a truly fabulous write. I felt I read it before, did you repost? Regardless it is a genius write that deserves to be brought back into the light my friend or I may be confusing it with another author, amazing write 💕
Thanx MARION!!.
YES!!...It's the final edit of a poem I posted
before.....I'm always tinkering with pieces
I am not quite satisfied with and normally
I write at the bottom 'Final Edit' just forgot
to this time......thanx again for your amazing
support of my work Marion......you rock!!..Peace......T xo : )