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Hints of a song

Hints of a song

Hints of a song float through the open window
Just loud enoughย 
Enough to forget
Everything
Silenced by a passing car
Until the outer world fades once more
A breeze of melody
Reaches my heart
More than enough
To make me cry

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Nigel Cresswell...

I love Edward Hoppers painting and this works brilliantly.ย 
Music and memory. So powerful.ย 
Great writeย 
Nigelย 

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Marsipona

Thank you! I love Hopper too! He is one of my favorite painters !

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Tony Taylor

Hi MARSIPONA!!
Just like so many of the greatest artists of all time.... you have touched upon the greatness that exists in all creative pursuits/endeavors!!.....And in so doing.......you have reminded yourself and ALL of us...... that greatness (in ALL of its forms)ย  comes through purity..... and the understanding that ALL people carry that intangible...... that shines so brightly....... when we but say........."I too shall carry self expression to ALL of its heights'.... whether that be momentarily or not...... for to Take it to its heights.... we but need..... to allow ourselves to let it wash over us in ALL of its glorious, genuine, purity!!...... theย purity that we find in customizing our words through the character that we see ourselves becoming........ย For we could NOT possibly carry its torch to its heights without the faith that God has already provided!!............ the fact of the matter is that we are here.... right now....... carrying that which is ALREADY providedย us...... and expressing it through poetic pursuits ......conveying it through words of TRUTH.......in theย gloryย that is innately alive inside of us..... by the birthright that is truly God-given...... and....... easily recognizable...... through the eyes of that which IS US!!.......NEVER forget.......... that we carry God inside of us!!....... by being poetically aware of that which is NOT!!...... for if we dare to become truly great poets/ writers then we had better be held accountable to some standard.... and that standard is within us..... and that voice inside of our heads.... is US.......poetically responsible/answerable to the one true voice...... call it what you will......I call it God.... some call it Buddha!!....... Allah!!..... whatever, the truth only works one way!!.......I LOVE your song choice & yourย picture choice!!....VERY cool stuff you got goin' on here!!..... There's a PURITY at work in this piece of poetic prose....... and a sense of the awareness of God floating on the breeze that floats through the window.......a gorgeous piece of poetry in the sense that you've touched upon a fine sense of poeticย succinctness within!!........A heartbeat that flattens the reader with beauty that works like the breeze itself!!.......ALL STARS!!...& PINNED!!..........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.........T xo ?โœดโค
PS> so sorry for rambling on..... it just pops out sometimes!!.... smiles.....T xo ?โœดโคโœดโคโœด?
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Marsipona

Don't be sorry! I loved reading your comment! Thank you so much!! Your comment almost made me cry!

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Marsipona

Thank you! I really love this song, I think it's one of the most beautiful songs ever written!

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Terry Kay

Marsipona,. Nice poem!ย  Loved that song!ย  Terry Kay

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