~ HOLES IN THE MACHINE ~
In psychotic pools, holes of words drowned
In dampened spirits and thoughts left unspoken
A single ray of light, shines
Through chiseled holes of hallucination
As apparitions and as holes in the machine, translucent
That move, within spinning grooves
GreasedΒ with the stuff of life
Like light that morphs, into the arena
Into the dualistic holes where darkness shifts
And steely cogs, join holes in the machine
Pumping and grinding out clouds of steam
That groan through bubbles above
Through seismic evolution
Heaving their way to the light and the dark
Of holes in the lungs
Of cancerous thoughts
Spewed out as poetry
And left to the few
To comprehend
To interpret
To present
As their own,
Original,
Holes in the machine....
Tony Taylor
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this almost sounds like one of those psychedelicΒ songs from back in the70's or 80's love this.
YAY!!....Thanx DARKLY!!...... you found the heart!!..... big smiles,.......T xo ?β€
Hi Tony my friend, um, like did we, like, do acid together in the 80's. This is kinda familiar....
Great write mate,
your friend Nigel
Hey Sir NIGEL!!... what?... you don't remember that trip bro?..... well it WAS 'Orange Sunshine'.......I guess I'll forgive you!!..LOL!!.....you're awesome!!......thanx for this my friend!!....... Kings to you!!......T xo ?β΄?
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Cool imagination well written angelΒ
Thanx so much ANGEL!!.... hugs n smiles!!......T xo β€
What can I say but well done.Β very well written.Β What a pure and vivid imagination you have.Β Excellent!
So glad you caught the groove Sir SIMON!!.......thanx for reading & commenting kind Sir!!....... peace n stuff!!.......T xo ?β΄?
Holy, original, psychotic, poetry! Tony! Again I am impressed!
Q :)
Hey Thanx so much QUIXOTIC!!...... that's a 'Way Cool' comment my friend.......VERY much appreciated!!....... Kings to you!!...... smiles......T xo ?β΄β€Β
Dear Tony, You are so gifted. I usually have to read your work twice for my pea brain to put it together...this write took 3...? Always impressed with you and Cherie.Β Glad I meet you two..Love, Terry Kay
Thanx TERRY!!..... we both feel the same about you....... so glad you liked this..... but...... you don't have a 'pea brain' ....I simply wrote this as an experimental tribute to the style of lyrics that Roger Waters used in his 'Pink Floyd' lyric lines!!.....NOT so easy to decipher!!..... smiles....... Lots of love to you and yours!!.......T xo ?β΄?
Now I wouldn't have picked on that,Β I wasn't a Pink Floyd fan. If it had been Jimi Hendrix,Β Led Zeppelin or Motown I may have had a chance...Β I can see a relection of Pink Floyd now though.Β I'm just teasing about my pea brain..... although honestly l"m sure it wouldn't take much effort for you to intimidate me. Enjoy the rest of Sunday. I have a b day poem I'm going to post.Β You and Cherie...Happy Birthday..Terry Kay
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Big Smiles!!......I'm definitely with youΒ on Hendrix & Zeppelin!!...and thanx so much for the Birthday poem!! (I think I left a comment there?).......Anyway, NO WAY you're a Pea Brain.....you're WAY too cool!! (more smiles).......thanx again TERRY!!......talk soon....T xo :-)
orange marmalade wow and groovy
Thanx for the 'Groovy' GREG!!.......hugs n smiles!!.....T xo ?β΄?β΄?
Wow!! What an image you have conveyed here tony, fantastic skills you have sir!! ???