House of salt
Like 4 Pin it 1Thou shalt not bring this evil
Back into the house,
For it brings the bitterness of a
Hundred years after the death of
Your brother through the slayings;
Into this earth with its allies split
In armour we shall force our way;
The women themselves lay bare
And naked raped numerous times;
The children now slaves
Into this earth is the fire and
Destruction for the transgressions
As Daria was raped by a soldier
From the 12th column
She lay bare with blood leaving her vagina and a stake in her heart
By the time the healer had made his way across the city
The lady of the King who was one of a few concubines lay dead
Killed by a traitor
This marked the beginning of the end
And I shalt not want
Lay bare across the table
And I shalt not want
Lay bare across the table
And I shalt not want
Lay bare across the table
Dead in her own blood
And I shalt not want
The salt of the earth
On this judgement day
The court full
The accused sentenced
At that point his neck slit
For the raping of Daria
Repeatedly,
Her body bare and bloodied
Laying in the flames
By which this raging fire brings
Forth the birth of the
House of salt
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Comments
Oh my goodness JAI MASTERS!!!!..... what a stunning piece of poetry...... biblical in resonance..... evil underlying unbelievable phrasings........ but I know of no references to Dario biblically or mythologically.....which leads me to believe...... this is pure creativity at its finest...... the ugliness that men are capable of...... on full display....... fantastic write man.....I need some of whatever you've got goin' on over there brother poet.......ALL STARS!!...... kick ass my friend.......LOVE and ROCKETS !!........T xo. ?
Ps. I meant Daria!!
Morning Tony,
I enjoyed our dinner last night,
the whisky was frisky and
the time sublime;
therefore you can accuse me
of making the darn thing up;
guilty as sin!!
lUV & hope Jai:)
AWE INSPIRING JAI!
Morning Lisa,
I enjoyed our dinner last night,
the sea air was misty and the
uhum better stop there!!
luV & thanks Jai:)
Hi Jai Such a powerful sad write I don`t know
the painting that is your pic that accompanies your write
but your words seem to describe the scene,
A Great write my friend
Best wishes Debs
Morning Debs;
I enjoyed our dinner last night
when you read my poem
you made me cry!
No that was the onions you say;
How art thou in your land?
I await the new presidento.
Luv & happiness Jai:)
God this is so good Jai.... I'm reeling a bit from the power and depth in your words. Like one of the classic writers of old, you have transported me. This is marvelous. So glad I stopped in. All stars and pinned. Bravo poet.
Hi Rebecca
the days of old are here again unfortun.
with violence ubiquitous; we need leaders.
thank you for reading my poem today.
Kind Rgs jai:)