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How Does It Feel?...

How Does It Feel?...

How did it feel,
when I kissed your soul with mine.
when I entered your subconscious,
did memories of me travel down your spine.
Did it tickle your heart strings,
lighten the dark spots of your past,
was my spirit worth sacrificing for all the copper and stones.
The one's you used to break my bones,
as words are said not to hurt you,
but still cause pain,
when the happy moments felt in reality became a figment of your imagination.
Was it easy to use someone who never used you,
was I too good to be true.
This child of the universe,
sensitive, fierce and free.
But still only gave herself to the one who ride the waves of love and live life filled with wisdom and laughter.
To powerful for many to handle.
A flame that cannot be put out,
a fire that will always keep on burning.
So how does it feel,
when you let this light slip into the darkness?.....

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Tony Taylor

Hey GEORGIA!!.. so good to see you on the pages girlfriend!!...... The fiery passion in this write suggests to me that you've experienced an intense relationship since you've been gone ......I could be wrong (hope I am ? or maybe not? Just hope you're alright ❤)...... " was my spirit worth sacrificing.."....... there's a ferocious intensity running through this piece.....VERY compelling dear poet sister!!......ALL STARS!!...... well done!!..... much Love to you and yours !!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo ✴???✴❤?

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Georgia Elliott

Thank you Tony for those beautiful words. It was definitely written with my most deepest of feelings in words.
I'm humbled by the effect it managed to have.
may you have a beautiful & positive day.
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