Poem -
HOW WE EMBALM ENTERNITY
when you have an inner diorama
destiny turns on the radio and laughs
at the sands foaming on the beach
of your breach
where the night air is salt tang
and unclipped
and starlings dive out of que
intertwined in descent
by a web of soaring-
above the daily maze
with unkempt eyes like barrels
tumbling from the sky
to stick the
landing.
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Sir AUGUST!!.....ok...first of all, that has to be one of the best titles of a poem I have EVER come across.....In fact, If you wouldn't mind, I'd like to do my own version of this title??!!........this poem Sir, has the qualities of the finest literary ingredients....Truly creative phrasing, newly applied words to old scenarios, fantastic imagery, flowing rhythmic quality, and superb delivery of what its Title implies.....I LOVE everything about this my friend.....If it were possible I would like very much to just beam over to where you are..... just to be able to speak with the person who's words I find quite inspirational.....just an afternoon would do as I am sure you are a very busy man!!.....One of my fav's ~
~ "With unkempt eyes like barrels
tumbling from the sky...."
Wow!!.....just stunning writing!!.....PINNED!!.....I am your cyber-friend and ever admirer!!......stay groovy dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
I am overjoyed!!!! I feel blessed....
Feel Free to explore the Title of this one and see what you find. My Muse is Curious. Go Forth!
wow August Arps! I believe this is my all time favorite of yours! the picture you created in my mind was a delight, and I am so impressed with the concept! great write!....................................................Jim
i had no idea I'd be writing anything worthwhile that afternoon... I am very grateful. Thank You Jim!!!