Poem - 14 July 2023, 15:17

Husk

Bonfire Potato

Twenty five years young
Going strong
Sex, drugs, alcohol
The occasional whiff
Of a soda bottle bong...

40 years old... Inbetween
Not enough words in the alphabet
To describe the things I've seen
Take me back
I wanna go there..
To the wasteland of plentiful youth
Please take me there!

I'm a burnt out shell of my former self
A charred husk
A bonfire potato caked in ash and dust..
Smother me in butter
Quench my lust

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Poetry Genre:

Tragicomedy

Topic:

The Soul

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Marion15 July 2023, 02:59

Great write Syd...shame our minds dont age with our bodies...I'm forever stuck in my 30's 🙂😆 🤩

Syd15 July 2023, 06:32

Thanks Marion,

I must stop writing when I've had a drink 😆. I forgot I'd posted this last night. I'm in the process of writing something much better....that's if I ever get it finished.

Take care - Syd xo

Marion21 July 2023, 05:42

Don't put yourself down Syd...you are an amazing writer x