"Hymns of my soul"

In this lonesome journey ,
as you shine on my soul.
I levitated in your never
ending dreams in the cosmos.
I felt ecstatic as you whispered
melodies of love every night..
You entice me with your magnetism.
seducing me with your stellar speech
As we unite on the metaphysical plane
memories imprinted immortally..
Galactic symphonies heard loud
around in our spiritual nuptial .
Let us immortalize this infinite juncture
as you are the hymn of my soul.

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Comments
Dynamic piece of work. the following lines are highly impressive:
"Galactic symphonies heard loud
around in our spiritual nuptial."
Ravindra Kumar
Thnxxx Ravindra ji for your kind review...Happy to know that you liked it..
I m very glad that you like my silly thoughts dear Cherie.And deep gratitude for your sweet and honest review.
Love yaa
Dear Piusha Singh,
A good melody of love, tied up in a spiritual bundle of emotions, I love the starting of the verse as below, The image used for this verse is superb. Congrats
My applause, My Vote, Nominated.
My Reading between the lines: Loneliness is an aching empty space in the center of our being, a deep longing to love and to be loved, to be fully known and accepted by at least one other person. It is a unfilled, evocative sound sweeping thru our depths, chilling our bones and causing us to shiver.
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thnxxx williams ji for your love and support.
Dear Piusha Singh,
Many Congrats on your winning nominations, Your poems are extremely good, Keep writing
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thnxxx a million Ji for your Love and support.
Cheers!!!
OOPS!! kill me ,sorry my android is troublesome, My apologies again for typing your name wrongly williams ji.Hope you will forgive..
Thnxxx
Piusha Singh,
You may address me " Willy " in short if you like.
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Piusha Singh,
Never mind for " Thnxxx a million Ji " Good luck, dear Piusha,
Regards
Willy
Please study your words as you were talking to some one in you poems .
This is very good ,your poem is puzzling which is very good.
I like it poetry is all about feeling and you got some thing special.
OOH thnxxx Anthony for your kind review