Poem -

HYPNOTYZING ODE !!!

HYPNOTYZING ODE !!!

Are you an exotic truth of my past?

Infinite craving for your poesy prevail.

Amaranthine adoration compiling within my soul ,

Since unknown millennium of my entity.

You abate  my  uncontrolled torment,

by exiguous limits etched from your soul.

Perpetual await  every twilight

to corrugate in your hypnotizing ode .

Awakening the hidden  devotion within me,

chiselling me with your colloquy into a fine sculpture.

Tranquilize me with your soothing effigy,

Exhilarating my thoughts as deep reflections .

Sing  aloud the symphonies of our ruminations ,

thawing all the bitterness around us....
 

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

 Piusha Singh,

Wow, a great and amazing ode to hypnotize human mind through the miracles inherited from the values of body. But, this verse is bit different from your usual style, though the concept remains almost same as in your earlier spiritual oriented verses. A powerful knife to chop off few words and terminologies which  may bring the poem to an upper level of appreciation 

Tranquilize me with your soothing effigy,

Exhilarating my thoughts as deep reflections .

Sing  aloud the symphonies of our ruminations ,

thawing all the bitterness around us....

Reading in between your lines: Your soul is an unseen violin in an  orchestra; I know not what instruments, what swindle strings and harps, drums and its sound and clash inside yourself. All you hear is the melody and another symphony of life. It seems to be like the piano or the violin; it's about how smart you could play the melodies to make a good synchronization or harmony. How is it possible that you swim in that river against the waves of spiritual bliss with regard to the realities of life on earth.Hence an appreciation goes to your verse for the many ways in which you continue to support the mission of symphony of body and the soul. My applause, My vote and My nomination, dear Piusha Singh 

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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piusha singh

Thnxxx a million William for such  excellent remarks...both positive and negatives..

Love

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

 Piusha Singh,

Congrats on your winning nomination

Regards & Love

WILLY

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