HYPNOTYZING ODE !!!

Are you an exotic truth of my past?
Infinite craving for your poesy prevail.
Amaranthine adoration compiling within my soul ,
Since unknown millennium of my entity.
You abate my uncontrolled torment,
by exiguous limits etched from your soul.
Perpetual await every twilight
to corrugate in your hypnotizing ode .
Awakening the hidden devotion within me,
chiselling me with your colloquy into a fine sculpture.
Tranquilize me with your soothing effigy,
Exhilarating my thoughts as deep reflections .
Sing aloud the symphonies of our ruminations ,
thawing all the bitterness around us....
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Comments
Piusha Singh,
Wow, a great and amazing ode to hypnotize human mind through the miracles inherited from the values of body. But, this verse is bit different from your usual style, though the concept remains almost same as in your earlier spiritual oriented verses. A powerful knife to chop off few words and terminologies which may bring the poem to an upper level of appreciation
Reading in between your lines: Your soul is an unseen violin in an orchestra; I know not what instruments, what swindle strings and harps, drums and its sound and clash inside yourself. All you hear is the melody and another symphony of life. It seems to be like the piano or the violin; it's about how smart you could play the melodies to make a good synchronization or harmony. How is it possible that you swim in that river against the waves of spiritual bliss with regard to the realities of life on earth.Hence an appreciation goes to your verse for the many ways in which you continue to support the mission of symphony of body and the soul. My applause, My vote and My nomination, dear Piusha Singh
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thnxxx a million William for such excellent remarks...both positive and negatives..
Love
Piusha Singh,
Congrats on your winning nomination
Regards & Love
WILLY
My deep gratitude william..