Poem -
Hypothetical Thought
What if I was to die tonight,
Taking my own life?
A cry for help,
Threatening to kill myself.
Jumping from up high,
Would my family be surprised?
I lead such an unhappy life,
It makes sense to misuse this knife.
I don't see the point could never really find a path,
Not a bad idea listening to the radio while I take a bath.
Anything and everything I do I lose,
Maybe I'll win putting my head into this noose.
All this talk with no one listening is just,
Another step closer for me walking in front of a bus.
The other day i figured im done messing around,
To the basement arsenal I went down.
My note read this is no longer fun I want out,
Picked out a gun and put it in my mouth.
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wow this is deep my man hope its just hypothetical very sad to feel this way. Hope things are bit brighter for you in real life better to notice yourself than wait a eternity for others to take note. Keep cool :-)
norman hardwith you said it perfectly; yes indeed self recognition and having a sense of self-worth at some point has to be the 'owners' responsibility, Devon this is a well written poem (though dark is the subject) and there has been many great poets who gravitated to the theme of suicide; Sylvia Plath, Anne Sexton, just to name a few; Suicide is an incredibly complex subject matter that I don't understand to be honest...I do understand, somewhat the need to be 'recognized and encouraged'... again, norman said it and I echo; hope it's just a hypothetical thought...stay well,Â
~~A cry for help,
 Threatening to kill myself.
Jumping from up high,
 Would my family be surprised?
I lead such an unhappy life,
I just posted a poem myself and its about pain must learn to respect it or it will eat you up. Emotional pain is much worse than a broken arm or a hammer on the thumb :-)
Hi Devon! This poem really got to me personally...I wrote a poem recently called Just a Thought...and have written several on the topic of suicide. I understand the pain and the thoughts and the way people view you when you express emotions as deep as these. I really hope this is just a thought or a way to vent your feelings. I often do the same and people don't know how to react. Just know I am always here if you ever need to talk...about anything.
With Love,
Val ♥
Norman, Christopher, and Val thanks for the ccomments and your concern but there is no need for it this is strictly about the idea that at one point is contemplated by all and i do admit at the time i was depressed there would have been no way i could have put that much emotion into it but i have too much to live three kids a wife im
here for the long haul. Val i appappreciate the offer as well your too kind.