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I.... ACHE....

I ache to see you
To know if you're alright
To see if you're ok
If it's nice where you are

Or are you quite dead
In that cold earthen bed

Where we packed you away
With a kiss on your head

I ache

M P 10/8/21

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Being Me

Oh Marion ...the heartache is easily felt through the lines. I never, ever want to imagine the loss felt so I know how brave and strong you are being right now. Your words, as always, reach right into your reader's heart and by god do thdy tug the strings. Love and hugs my dear friend xx
๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’•

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Marion

Thanks Tina...I think I know now that these feelings will never go.away...I will always always yearn for him, how can you not want to see your own child. Hugs ๐Ÿ’•ย 

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Being Me

Hugs, sweet friend ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ’• xx

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Jill Tait

โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ

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Marion

Thanks Jill..sorry fir late reply xxx

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Gwendoline

Just eye watering in every line. It truly is a physical aching need. The pain is felt here in this raw pieceย 
hugs and love ๐Ÿ’—x

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Marion

Thanks Gwen ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

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Jill Tait

โค๏ธ๐ŸŒนโค๏ธ

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