Poem -
I am a puddle
The dark clouds come in it start to rain thunder and lighting
I am puddle I cuddle the road side like holding a baby
Please don't drive in me and splash me its like blood from my veins
The clouds clear and its night time and the moon shines on me
I am puddle and day time comes and the sun comes out and drys
Me up and now i am just another wet spot on the road intill it rains agin
Winter is coming and darker cloulds come in its starts snow and ice
and windy blows now I am a ice puddle please don't walk on me or you will brake me
and I will be in pieces the sun comes out and melt me and now I am a wet stop in the road
I am a puddle in the road
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Hey GREG!!....I enjoyed the perspective you chose here...... an interesting metaphor as well!!....... you always surprise me with your stuff!!...... smiles!!...... stay groovy!!......T xo
thank you Tony this was a hard one to write I am very honored you like it its always wonderful when you read and like my poems thank you
What a lovely view you gave the reader of life as a 'Puddle' interesting subject and entertaining- liked this very much !
Lodigiana xx
thank you so much for read lodgiana
Our Dear Greg,
Your poem is so beautiful.
It's words make us think deeply
About what you've written
And compare it to our own lives
Some of us have puddles
In our hearts and saddened Souls
The Tears Of Eternity that are falling
For lost loves, we will e'er extol
All our love,
Linda and Larry xxx
thank you Linda and Larry that's very interesting that you would think that this poem is about what you say now you have me wondering I wrote this poem to give the pubble a life and feelings and I want people to and look at things in life that we don't look at in in way that you don't always look at my other poem I AM TREE IN WINTER is the same way lately I have been wondering about my past life and where my soul will go when I die lots of reading about what your soul is and where its been many theories old theories is that when you die that your soul goes in to a learning process of 40 years then ones you have complete that then you are reborn as a new person now new theories say that when you die your soul and your memories of your life go with you and the family that you had in this life you will meet up with tham agin in another life and thay say that your family and friends you know now and pets you know tham befor very interesting don't you think please have great day peace and love to you
The [cloulds] clouds clear and its night time and the moon shines on me ... Check your spelling of "clouds" here, Greg..
Winter is [comeing] coming and darker [cloulds] clouds come in its starts snow and ice... There's no "e" in "coming." Again, "clouds" is misspelled.
For the life of me I can't understand why no one has mentioned these errors to you yet. Are they really reading or simply skimming?
Nice work...
~Dean Kuch
thank you Dean for telling me about miss spelled words for now I will try and be more careful and do read it back and take more time thank you my friend
Your more than welcome, Greg.
~Dean ?