I buried her today
I buried her today
Stood for a moment then walked away
I just kept walking out of that place
Shes gone now and i hope will never come back
She did me no favours, gave me no peace
And now l lay her here in this place
I held my head up and walked away with grace
I could not live with her for one second more
Listen to her undmine me, always putting me down
Seeing her walk about with that frown
Trusting too easy, never feeling sure
Loving all the wrong people
Not seeing her worth
No, im glad shes gone
She just could not stay
I had to bury her, and then walk away
The old me is gone forever
And here i stand, tall, present and proud
No longer trying to disapear into the crowd
Im my new best friend see
Move over world get ready for - THE BRAND NEW ME. :)
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I believe a past and unpleasant incident narrated here, still the poet is in dilema, well done.
sayed
Hi Sayed, hope you are well. Yes written from experience :) wrote this a few years ago.
Thanks for your comments Sayed, i am very grateful
You have had some great poems shared, well done to you.
Have a good week.
Wow Louise,
To the new in you, the proud head held high, more pep in her step, assurance in all she say and do and to look back, (not ever to be in her cards), no more, may my hat be taken off too.You wrote the epitaph, of a life time, for a short life time, of the old in her, that you have so proudly and with just cause, laid to rest. A power has she in her, sought by many, to be able to possess, though the courage obtained by the few, to acquire and maintain...I too lay a flower of remorse for the old but raise this glass in toast, for the phoenix you have allowed to rise...Great poem and wonderful courage to have been obtained, by you the poetess and the character, in your very well written poem....
Kindest or regards,
Jim
Thank you Jimmy :) Grateful for your comment.
WOW! Such a great poem. I felt connected in the experience.
Josh
Ahh thanks Joshua, grateful for your comment. :)
Great write, thanks for sharing x
Thanks Claire :) glad you like it.
Excellent poem. shows real inner strength
Thanks so much John, grateful for your comment.